Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, September 1, 2021
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Kia Ora Johan,
ReplyDeleteWell done with your examples of different poetry styles on your topic of Makariki. It can be quite challenging thinking of particular words that suit the style and topic to make it work, and I think you have done a lovely job.
I particularly liked your acrostic poem and you have come up with some great sentences to describe Matariki.